Lillian Jean slowly hits Cassie across her right cheek. Cassie stay strong, and does not cry, but Cassie is very angry. So angry, that she… strikes Lillian across her face! Unlike Cassie, Lillian started crying, screaming “DADDY!” wishing for him to come and hurt Cassie. Cassie immediately speeds her way home.
Cassie told her dad what Lillian Jean did to her, but she did not mention what she did to Jean. When cassie was getting ready for bed, she recognized that Lillian Jean told her who she really admires.
When Cassie is at school, at recess time she appears to find Lillian has a big red hand mark on her right cheek. It is noticeable but she acts like its not there. Just like her dad, how does Cassie know that, well Mr.Jean did not appear at her house. Anyways, Lillian Jean tells everybody that Cassie has abused her, when necessary that is not that true in this case. Cassie gets ragest, thinking about doing something big. Cassie tells everybody that Lillian admires, T.J.! Lillian, her cheeks start to getting red with embarrassment.
“NO! I don’t like T.J.”
Everyone starts teasing Lillian and gossiping. Lillian starts running to the girls bathroom. With Cassie running behind her.
When Cassie is in the bathroom crying, they start talking, socializing with each other. Lillian feels bad for Cassie but, is still mad, a little. Lillian Jean starts apologizing to Cassie, for what she has done.Cassie does not believe it but she accepts her apology. They turn out to be nice, not friends, but not enemies. Cassie starts running out of the bathroom saying Lillian does not like T.J. maybe not having drama is better than having drama!
I like how you added mini important details.
I like how you continued where we left off to kind of refresh were we left off on the passage. I also like how you added important details in Cassie’s Fight.